not quite optimism: 4-21-12

quiet
and the day needs to rest
bright sun and clouds crept low against my skin
made it breathe in life and joy and
fear
that i kept down
and pushed away
change is the centrifuge keeping me from
breaking into particles that
separate
are unbearable
and small.

i can trust this
i think.

no edict, no scribbled vows or
poetic-written promises
spoken for a judge or holy
shaman-man could make this any more
than what it is:
the promise, implied
and whispered to the darkness
this is where we are
and this is where we’ll stay.

4 responses to “not quite optimism: 4-21-12”

  1. This is wonderful! I love theh words that you choose! No one wirtes like this anymore, thank you for sharing this with us! ❤
    Your facebook friend Victoria ODonnell (forsaken) =]

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    1. thank you. 🙂 i’m just kind of spitting out what i’m thinking… i’m glad it makes somebody happy.

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  2. Nice prose as always-wish i could get some tutorials from u sometime-i am so technically impaired-i love your wonderful ability to express your inner thoughts.

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